Mini-Saga : The last day of my life
It was a nice day, I could see a lot of flowers in the park. When I finished my work and I was ready to return home I saw a big object coming towards me. I couldn’t do anything. That was the first time I didn’t return to my beehive.
posted by sunrise @ 11:10 pm
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3 Comments:
Good job!!
Will be waiting for more inspiration and comments to other bloggers.
I have added you to the list of class bloggers. Check!
See my comment on your language.
You should say:
...and I was ready to return home
(no preposition in this case)
What about writing a bit more! Time! isn't it?
Thanks for your comments but this has come to an end ... ohhh what a pity!!
An do now it's time to know how are you? we are going to meet in Sitges hehe
many kisses
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